May 23, 2019 20:45
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Persian (Farsi) term

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Persian (Farsi) to English Art/Literary Poetry & Literature
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Proposed translations

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32 mins

Common pain

این‌ها گرچه با هم همایند ندارند اما توجه من به حفظ سبک نگارنده است
Peer comment(s):

agree Parham Sadeqi Javid
146 days
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+1
7 hrs

shared pain/suffering

shared pain/suffering
Peer comment(s):

agree Parak Nojoumi
7 days
Thanks
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17 hrs

mutually experienced pain

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1 day 14 hrs

.... the suffering common... the bothering shared...

The Persian is not rhymed! Why not give it a try! Three choices:

A)

I am the bothering shared
which must all be dared
not so quietly spared

B)

I am the suffering, loud
cry me, common pain, out

C)

I...
the suffering am, common
ye folks! Make call on
let go of me, come on!
Peer comment(s):

neutral Ali Sharifi : The mutual suffering.
12 days
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528 days

a pain common to many

I am a pain common to many,
Cry me out..
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794 days

Common woe

Cry me that I am the common woe
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