Sep 9, 2015 22:32
8 yrs ago
Russian term
удар получается скованным
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description of a baseball game
Затем мы видим Алекса на большой перемене: возбужденный, он несется, чтобы присоединиться к играющим в бейсбол. .... Наконец наступает его очередь. Алекс выходит на площадку и кричит: "Подавай!" Когда подающий бросает мяч, Алекс наносит по мячу сильный удар и промахивается. Он выглядит огорченным, но кричит: "Давай ещё!" Снова он бьет и снова промахивается. На этот раз он хмурится и ничего не говорит. Мальчик становится более напряженным, зубы его сжимаются. Алекс наносит третий удар - удар получается скованным, и он промахивается ещё раз.
thanks in advance!
thanks in advance!
Proposed translations
(English)
3 +1 | a tense swing | Sasha Spencer |
3 | not even a full swing | Rachel Douglas |
3 | the swing comes out chopped/choppy | Angela Greenfield |
Proposed translations
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a tense swing
Maybe something along the lines of:
Alex makes a third attempt with a tense swing and misses again.
Alex makes a third attempt with a tense swing and misses again.
Reference:
http://www.thehittingproject.com/fix-long-baseball-swing.html
http://www.swing-smarter-baseball-hitting-drills.com/baseball-hitting-mechanic.html
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20 mins
not even a full swing
"Alex swings for the third time, but not even with a full swing, and misses again."
I think that's the idea, although you might want to write something like "but now awkwardly" or "but now half-heartedly" or "but now tensely." He's freaked himself out and is no longer loose.
I think that's the idea, although you might want to write something like "but now awkwardly" or "but now half-heartedly" or "but now tensely." He's freaked himself out and is no longer loose.
14 hrs
the swing comes out chopped/choppy
What causes a choppy swing and how to fix it?
I have two players on my team that have started chopping at the ball. Both are very good hitters, but out of the blue they will chop down on the ball like an axe. http://www.baseball-fever.com/showthread.php?117397-What-cau...
I have two players on my team that have started chopping at the ball. Both are very good hitters, but out of the blue they will chop down on the ball like an axe. http://www.baseball-fever.com/showthread.php?117397-What-cau...
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