Glossary entry

Spanish term or phrase:

reinaba

English translation:

reigned / sat majestically

Added to glossary by jmf
Mar 9, 2022 16:28
2 yrs ago
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Spanish term

reinaba

Spanish to English Art/Literary Poetry & Literature
La gran sala de conciertos de la Academia, en la que tenía lugar la selección de los nuevos alumnos, era tan grande que los aspirantes se sentían intimidados. Un piano de cola Steinway, iluminado por una lámpara de pie, reinaba solitario sobre el escenario. Más allá, sentado en la cuarta o quinta fila del patio de butacas (...)

A Steinway grand piano, illuminated by a floor lamp, reigned solitary on the stage.

A solitary Steinway grand piano, illuminated by a floor lamp, rested majestically on the stage.

(...) sat/rested/stood majestically on the stage?

I've been trying to come up with way to convey this with the same grandiosity as "reigned" but don't know if I'm capturing it. I don't completely dislike "reigned solitary" and think it's an interesting way to phrase this, but wonder if it sounds too odd in US English? I would appreciate feedback if anyone has ideas or an opinion. Many thanks in advance.
Proposed translations (English)
4 +2 reigned
3 +3 dominated

Discussion

Barbara Cochran, MFA Mar 20, 2022:
Disagree... ...wholeheartedly with "reigned" (I don't agree, in this instance, with what appears as part of the book references offered, as a good translation in this case, esp. because of what seems like at least a bit of redundancy in the first example). But I do like the client's choice of "sat majestically" quite a bit.
philgoddard Mar 9, 2022:
I think sometimes we get fixated on finding synonyms because the obvious choice of word seems too simple.
Cecilia Gowar Mar 9, 2022:
You could say ¨an imposing Stainway grand piano dominated the stage.¨

Proposed translations

+2
1 hr
Selected

reigned

I think this works perfectly well. There's an exact English equivalent, and we should respect the writer's choice of word.


My piano reigned in the middle of the stage majestically.
http://books.google.com/books?id=zGgsDAAAQBAJ&pg=PT257&lpg=P...

In the middle of the floor, a beautiful large piano reigned supreme
http://u1lib.org/book/11056196/f11233



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Note added at 1 hr (2022-03-09 17:34:48 GMT)
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Peer comment(s):

agree neilmac
33 mins
agree Carol Gullidge
13 hrs
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4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer. Comment: "Thanks so much to everyone! It was helpful to have this feedback. I preferred this version, but the client and author opted for my alternate version: A lone Steinway grand piano (...) sat majestically on the stage"
+3
8 mins

dominated

Example sentence:

The piano dominated the room, covering half the wall and wide enough to carry a Tiffany lamp, 3 stacks of sheet music,

She led me to her studio where a grand piano dominated the room.

Peer comment(s):

agree Barbara Cochran, MFA
7 mins
Thank you, Barbara!
agree Cecilia Gowar
15 mins
Thank you, Cecilia!
agree Simone Taylor
1 hr
Thank you, Simone!
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