Jul 9, 2020 19:49
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English term

There's no room when it comes ..... to illiteracy

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Again, I'm wondering whether the whole sentence is correct. Do you think it's a valid/correct sentence? In other words, is it correct to use the word "when" after "there's no room."
"There's no room when it comes to comparing questioning the use of language to "illiteracy".

I know that we can say: there's no room for ....

Context:
My questions were very genuine. Your misuse of language is appalling. There's no room when it comes to comparing questioning the use of language to "illiteracy".

Discussion

Yvonne Gallagher Jul 14, 2020:
@ Tony that is one possible meaning. There are others but without seeing the preceding (and following?) sentences the intent of the (bad) writing is unclear
Yassine El Bouknify (asker) Jul 11, 2020:
Thank you all for your help .
Tony M Jul 10, 2020:
@ Yvonne "One cannot compare 'questioning use of language' with 'illiteracy'"
Yvonne Gallagher Jul 10, 2020:
@ Asker We really need more context. Like Tony and others I find it hard to work out exactly the intention of the speaker. I don't have a problem with "there's no room when..." But what I find difficult, and surprised no one else mentioned it, are the juxtaposed "comparing questioning". The sentence needs rephrasing to make sense.
Tony M Jul 10, 2020:
@ Asker Once again, knowing the full context would help: I read this as someone having criticised someone's use of language (is this your Miss Red Pen?), and then being accused of being 'illiterate' for having done so, and this being their retort.
Tina Vonhof (X) Jul 9, 2020:
@asker No, that does not make sense - the word order is wrong this way. Does it have to be a literal translation or could you say: "It is not appropriate to compare...."? And note that the 'use of language' is not the same thing as 'language usage'. The use of language means using language in general; language usage refers to the way language is used, i.e., the different ways in which different people may express something. In your sentence, I think it is 'usage' that should not be compared to illiteracy.
Yassine El Bouknify (asker) Jul 9, 2020:
Thank you What about formulating it this way: "when it comes to comparing questioning the use of language to illiteracy, then there is no room." Does it make sense now?
JaneTranslates Jul 9, 2020:
@Yassine No, the sentence does not fully make sense, as you can see from the fact that my colleagues interpret it differently. And no, it's not perfectly correct. One of the things that you're missing is precisely what you pointed out yourself: the idiom is "there's no room FOR." If the writer chooses to use that idiom, somewhere there has to be a "for" to point us to the thing for which there is no room. That's the first problem.

The second problem is the phrase "questioning the use of language." The meaning is not clear. Tony's interpretation makes sense, but does not seem to match the previous sentence in the context given. Someone who has just said, "Your misuse of language is appalling" would, in my understanding, be more likely to then say something like, "But when I question your use of language, that's certainly not the same as calling you 'illiterate.'" Mark, Tony, Daryo, and I all have somewhat different interpretations of the meaning of that phrase; therefore, the sentence, as written, does not communicate well.
Daryo Jul 9, 2020:
the whole sentence is not quite right
feels either unfinished or uncorrected - someone couldn't decide which figure of speech to use and left both in the sentence - although the meaning of what is there is easy to decipher.

regarding

is it correct to use the word "when" after "there's no room."

the answer is simply YES - but only IF the rest of the sentence holds water.

A possible alternative:

"There's no room, when it comes to comparing questioning the use of language to "illiteracy", for any (flexibility/tolerance/ ....)

=> if someone starts comparing / equating asking questions about style with being illiterate, then that shows a lack of flexibility in thinking.

or

= if someone starts comparing / equating asking questions about style with being illiterate, then there will be no room for tolerance of such attitude

You could also try removing parts of the sentence to make it make sense.
Yassine El Bouknify (asker) Jul 9, 2020:
What do you think? The sentence is wordy, and I think it does make sense because it's perfectly and grammatically correct. Am I missing something?

Thank you
Tony M Jul 9, 2020:
@ Asker As you and Mark have said, the sentence as it stands seem to be woefully lacking "what it is there is no room for" — this sort of mid-sentence change of direction is very common in speech, of course.

I think what the speaker is trying to say is that 'questioning (challenging) the way we use language' is legitimate and should not be taken as implying that the questioner is in any way less literate.

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Incorrect sentence

The sentence looks and sounds incomplete. There is no room for WHAT?
The part "when it comes to comparing questioning the use of language to "illiteracy"" can be treated as an inserted please of information, a clarification, but after that we have to understand FOR WHAT there is no room or where there is no room (like in the house or on the page).
Peer comment(s):

disagree Christina Katranidou : It isn't an incomplete sentence,there is wrong phrasing and obvious misuse of the language.
2 hrs
Do you think "there is no room" does not require any continuation?
agree Victoria Britten : After all that is the Asker's question: is the sentence correct?
5 hrs
agree Tina Vonhof (X) : "There is no room" does not make sense. It has to go and the sentence should be reworded..
9 hrs
disagree Yvonne Gallagher : The sentence is NOT 'incomplete and I don't agree with your "explanation" at all
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see explanation

1. The meaning of this unpunctuated sentence unclear.
2. The syntax is incorrect.
3. As Yassine says, the correct idiom is "There's no room for (...).
4. Does "use of language" mean usage?
5. Compare to, is correct, questioning to, is not.

A corrected sentence might read:

"There's no room for the challenging of usage on the grounds of illiteracy, or for comparing usage with illiteracy."

The meaning seems to be that non-standard usage is not equivalent to illiteracy.
Note from asker:
I guess the sentence is grammatically correct .... in addition to that, we can say: "the use of language or/and usage of language are both correct
Peer comment(s):

neutral Tony M : Your point #5 is incorrect: the sentence is about 'comparing [questioning the use of language] to [illiteracy]' — so that part of the sentence is grammatically correct at least.
22 mins
neutral Christina Katranidou : Yes but only that part unfortunately...
12 hrs
agree Yvonne Gallagher : at least you attempted an explanation
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