Feb 9, 2020 23:13
4 yrs ago
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French term

comme enfant légitime né d'un père français

Non-PRO French to English Law/Patents Certificates, Diplomas, Licenses, CVs certificate of French nationality
More context :
'En effet son pere est francais en application des dispositions de l'article 17 du code de la nationalite francaise (redaction du 19/10/1945) comme enfant legitime d'un pere francais.

Looking for a 'smooth' rendering of this French text.
Proposed translations (English)
4 +9 as the legitimate child of a French father
Change log

Feb 10, 2020 00:19: writeaway changed "Language pair" from "French" to "French to English"

Feb 10, 2020 04:29: Michele Fauble changed "Level" from "PRO" to "Non-PRO"

Feb 10, 2020 20:28: Yolanda Broad changed "Term asked" from "comme enfant legitime ne d\'un pere francais" to "comme enfant légitime né d\'un père français"

Votes to reclassify question as PRO/non-PRO:

Non-PRO (3): Rachel Fell, philgoddard, Michele Fauble

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Proposed translations

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French term (edited): comme enfant legitime ne d'un pere francais
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as the legitimate child of a French father

What's wrong with that? I just feel it flows better adding 'the', though with no article in FR it would more usually be 'a'

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Note added at 10 hrs (2020-02-10 09:55:06 GMT)
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I think 'legitimate' is perhaps not PC in everyday speech, since it discriminates againts 'natural' children as being 'illegitimate' — but I think it still retains its original sense in legal terminology.

@ Asker: it seems to me the text is a bit convoluted, because as I understand it, it is saying that [the current child] can be French because his father himself was the legitimate son of a French man (i.e. grandfather)
As for the 'en effet', I'd have thought here 'in effect' or possibly even 'in point of fact' would do the trick — probably dependent on what appears in the preceding sentence?

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Note added at 15 hrs (2020-02-10 15:00:55 GMT)
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I don't think 'ondeed' would work here either — but like I said, it depends on what precedes. 'Indeed' would tend to confirm or reinforce the preceding statement — whereas I would see the 'en effet' here as probably introducing an explanation of what precedes, by amplifying on it.
Note from asker:
thanks Tony, just thought the sentence was not grammatically sound. To Phil, yes legitime is not used now in France I believe, not sure in the UK as people keep on using old terminology but from a legal stand point, I have not found it is not used any longer, if that makes sense To Write away, my query was about the 'French tournure' as I find 'En effet son pere est francais....comme enfant legitime.." perhaps it needs 'etoffement' here. What do you do with 'en effet' ? redondant here ? merci d'avance N
to PH -b Thanks but I don't think it works here methink
Peer comment(s):

agree writeaway : I don't really see the problem
43 mins
Thanks, W/A!
agree Kartik Isaac
2 hrs
Thanks, K.!
agree philgoddard : Legitimate is not PC, but that's what it says.
4 hrs
Thanks, Phil! I believe it is still the correct legal term.
agree Timothy Rake
5 hrs
Thanks, Timothy!
agree SafeTex
7 hrs
Thanks, S/T!
agree Neil Crockford
9 hrs
Thanks, Neil!
agree Jennifer White : Legitimate not PC? Really?
10 hrs
Thanks, Jennifer!
agree ph-b (X) : + with note added at 10 hours. "Indeed" for en effet?
10 hrs
Merci, Ph_B !
agree Eliza Hall : I like PhB's addition. And legitimate is still a legal term.
14 hrs
Thanks, Eliza!
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