Glossary entry (derived from question below)
French term or phrase:
ménageant des réserves où d’autres sont venus se loger
English translation:
creating reserves where other (colours/materials) settled
Added to glossary by
B D Finch
Jul 11, 2018 23:05
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French term
ménageant des réserves où d’autres sont venus se loger
French to English
Art/Literary
Art, Arts & Crafts, Painting
A painting
Hello,
I am translating an art gallery programme from French (France) into English (British) and am having trouble with the translation of one of the phrases in the description. The work in question is Semences by Pascal Pinaud.
A picture of the work can be found at the following link: http://www.s333485502.onlinehome.fr/index.php?/uvres/series-...
Here's where it appears in the source text for full context: "Au miroitement des surfaces de ses laques automobiles, les Semences substituent une pâte colorée, incrustée dans la toile brute. Disséminées sur de grandes toiles blanches, des mines de crayons de couleur sont écrasées et étalées à l’aide d’un rouleau à ensemencer. L’œuvre témoigne de recouvrements successifs durant lesquels le blanc a effacé certains éléments, ménageant des réserves où d’autres sont venus se loger."
Could anyone help please?
I am translating an art gallery programme from French (France) into English (British) and am having trouble with the translation of one of the phrases in the description. The work in question is Semences by Pascal Pinaud.
A picture of the work can be found at the following link: http://www.s333485502.onlinehome.fr/index.php?/uvres/series-...
Here's where it appears in the source text for full context: "Au miroitement des surfaces de ses laques automobiles, les Semences substituent une pâte colorée, incrustée dans la toile brute. Disséminées sur de grandes toiles blanches, des mines de crayons de couleur sont écrasées et étalées à l’aide d’un rouleau à ensemencer. L’œuvre témoigne de recouvrements successifs durant lesquels le blanc a effacé certains éléments, ménageant des réserves où d’autres sont venus se loger."
Could anyone help please?
Proposed translations
(English)
3 | creating reserves where other (colours/materials) settled | B D Finch |
3 -2 | leaving some colors where other ones came to stay | Nicholas Hankins |
Change log
Mar 26, 2020 11:08: B D Finch Created KOG entry
Proposed translations
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creating reserves where other (colours/materials) settled
... A reserve is a temporarily unfinished or blank area of a painting which is surrounded by painted areas that re either partially or fully completed.
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leaving some colors where other ones came to stay
At the beginning of the sentence, the description appears to be referring to the impact of the color white on the rest of the painting. This leads me to believe that this second half is talking about the result of such color choices on the painting as a whole. Hope this helps!
Peer comment(s):
disagree |
Tony M
: I think you're looking at this the wrong way round
6 hrs
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disagree |
Kevin Oheix
: I agree with "leaving some" but I wouldn't translate the end of this sentence literally. Something along the lines of "where more ... have been (added)".
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Discussion
"Réserves" are portions/spaces left blank, any protected parts, open areas
"Se loger" is to find room, nestle, arrange.
Here, I would say "added" as suggested by Tony, or "incorporated", "contained", "supplemented".
I think "sont venus" shouldn't be translated literally. Like Tony, I would use "have been".
Successive over-painting means that some areas have been covered with white paint, leaving spaces where yet more colours have been added.
Effectively, applying patches white paint is a bit like making "holes" going back to the blank canvas behind, and then starting again!
Yes, looking at the pictures, you can see there's a lot of white, but this is not because the artist was too lazy to cover all the canvas!