Dec 22, 2016 17:24
7 yrs ago
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Spanish term
cortejo
Spanish to English
Science
Geography
Text from the Canary Islands
Pistacia atlántica, y un cortejo de especies arbustivas y matas leñosas que incluyen Dendriopoterium pulidoi, Marcetella moquiniana, Cistus monspeliensis, Carlina canariensis, etc., y la notable o singular presencia del drago de Gran Canaria Dracaena tamaranae.
Proposed translations
(English)
4 +2 | a host of species // its attendant species | Robert Carter |
4 | retinue | Charles Davis |
3 +1 | profusion / wealth | Wendy Streitparth |
3 | entourage | Marie Wilson |
Proposed translations
+2
50 mins
Spanish term (edited):
un cortejo de especies
Selected
a host of species // its attendant species
You might also consider these if you want to get away from the metaphor:
"...a host of shrubs and thickets..." or "...its attendant species of shrubs and thickets..."
"...a host of shrubs and thickets..." or "...its attendant species of shrubs and thickets..."
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Comment: "Many thanks to all"
33 mins
retinue
I don't think this is a technical term. It's a metaphor comparing the shrubs and bushes that tend to accompany this tree to the entourage or retinue of an important personage on a ceremonial occasion. The relevant DRAE definition would be:
"Conjunto de personas que forma el acompañamiento en una ceremonia"
http://dle.rae.es/?id=B2D63JO
I think retinue is more usual with royalty and entourage with politicians. I think the metaphor works perfectly well in English; it gives a the text a bit of colour and it would be a pity to water it down. The idea is simply a group of minor entities supporting and emphasising the grandeur of a major entity. I think retinue of species is much more convincing as a metaphor than an entourage, and it sounds fine to me.
"Conjunto de personas que forma el acompañamiento en una ceremonia"
http://dle.rae.es/?id=B2D63JO
I think retinue is more usual with royalty and entourage with politicians. I think the metaphor works perfectly well in English; it gives a the text a bit of colour and it would be a pity to water it down. The idea is simply a group of minor entities supporting and emphasising the grandeur of a major entity. I think retinue of species is much more convincing as a metaphor than an entourage, and it sounds fine to me.
59 mins
entourage
This is a description of a tree and surrounding plants. I think entourage could be suitable.
Pistacia atlantica, and an entourage of species of shrubs...
en•tou•rage
1. a group of attendants or associates, as of a person of rank or importance: The opera singer traveled with an entourage of 20 people.
2. surroundings; environment: a house with a charming entourage of trees and flowers.
3. Archit.the landscaping and other nearby environmental features shown on a rendering of a building.
http://dictionary.infoplease.com/entourage
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Note added at 2 hrs (2016-12-22 19:30:45 GMT)
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I've just read the explanations Charles wrote and his mention of entourage. Due to wifi issues I didn't notice that until after I had posted my suggestion.
Pistacia atlantica, and an entourage of species of shrubs...
en•tou•rage
1. a group of attendants or associates, as of a person of rank or importance: The opera singer traveled with an entourage of 20 people.
2. surroundings; environment: a house with a charming entourage of trees and flowers.
3. Archit.the landscaping and other nearby environmental features shown on a rendering of a building.
http://dictionary.infoplease.com/entourage
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Note added at 2 hrs (2016-12-22 19:30:45 GMT)
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I've just read the explanations Charles wrote and his mention of entourage. Due to wifi issues I didn't notice that until after I had posted my suggestion.
+1
3 hrs
profusion / wealth
My rendering
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