Glossary entry (derived from question below)
English term or phrase:
judiciously edit them
Italian translation:
li rielaboro scrupolosamente
English term
Italy
judiciously edit them
A: Do you ever think about what you say?
B: I think about everything I say.
A: Really?
B: Yes. But, I think about it after I say it. That's the writer in me. The thoughts spill out of my head and then I go back later and judiciously edit them.
La mia proposta:
[...]
A: [...] I pensieri escono fuori dalla mia testa e dopo ci ritorno su e li riesamino con giudizio.
Cerco soluzioni migliori. Grazie!
| 3 +5 | li rielaboro scrupolosamente |
Francesca Siotto
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| 4 | ci ragiono (su) a mente fredda/lucidamente |
Federica Fiorucci
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Dec 4, 2013 08:23: Francesca Siotto Created KOG entry
Non-PRO (2): Daniela Zambrini, Francesco Badolato
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Proposed translations
Italy
Painstaking research and creativity
Native in: Italian
Works in: English to Italian, French to Italian, Spanish to Italian, and 1 more.
li rielaboro scrupolosamente
per spill out ti suggerisco "schizzare fuori", così sottolinei l'impulsività della mente creativa di uno scrittore, il quale non può controllare il proprio pensiero
i pensieri schizzano fuori dalla mia testa, dopo un po' ci torno su e li rielaboro scrupolosamente
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Daniela Zambrini
6 mins
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| agree |
Francesco Badolato
1 hr
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| agree |
VMeneghin
2 hrs
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| agree |
Mariagrazia Centanni
10 hrs
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| agree |
Magda Falcone
22 hrs
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Discussion
a me non dispiace la tua scelta di "con giudizio" per "judiciously", perché credo che evidenzi la differenza fra l'avventatezza delle parole dette senza pensare, e invece un esame più "giudizioso"...