Jun 27, 2003 08:06
20 yrs ago
Spanish term

unas emocionadas palabras

Spanish to English Other
XXX, chief executive officer of the XXXXXCompany for over four years, "tuvo ante la Junta unas emocionadas palabras de despedida, en las que agradeció...."

I can't seem to hit on anything which has the right tone to it......

Andy ideas??
TIA

Proposed translations

+2
7 hrs
Selected

delivered moving words of farewell at the shareholders' meeting

come on everybody, you can't just throw out a translation with FITTING IT IN the sentence

by the way, loaded with emotion is

colloquial
Peer comment(s):

agree Сергей Лузан
25 mins
agree María Isabel Estévez (maisa)
33 mins
agree Const12
2 hrs
disagree percebilla : moving refers to the effect on others.
1 day 21 hrs
moving words of farewell means the effect ON OTHERS....:)
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4 KudoZ points awarded for this answer. Comment: "Many thanks, Jane. This could be worked into the text perfectly. Many good ideas all round and thanks to everyone. (I hope I don't get any more tearful ex-CEO's.....;-)) Saludos, Andy."
+3
3 mins

moving words

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Peer comment(s):

agree Sara Noss
1 min
neutral claudia16 (X) : I think that would'nt necessarily mean that the persoon saying the words was emotional, it points more at the way it is received by the audience
6 mins
I think the sense is the same, i.e. you cannot produce emotion if it isn't there to start with
agree John Speese : Good choice, this means emotional, but in a positive way, which is the tone of the sentence.
3 hrs
agree Jane Lamb-Ruiz (X) : this is OK but what about FITTING IT IN THE SENTENCE...:)
7 hrs
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4 mins

gave an emotional goodby ...

x
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+4
6 mins

...seemed very touched when giving his (her) farewell speech

not literal but just an idea, you can say emotional but more about some one than something like words (am I wrong?)
you could say he became quite emotional when delivering his farewell...
Peer comment(s):

agree Sara Noss : Or, he made an emotional farewell speech. I think you are on the right lines. :-)
2 mins
yep
agree Gordana Podvezanec
16 mins
agree Martin Harvey : This is the one. Even better: was visibly touched / moved when ...
21 hrs
agree percebilla : WAS VISIBLY MOVED...THE emotions belong to the speaker NOT his audience as in some versions here
2 days 5 hrs
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+1
10 mins

delivered an emotional speech

another possibility
Peer comment(s):

agree Davorka Grgic
1 hr
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14 mins

heartfelt words

Something along these lines. Good luck!

PDF]Shore Road Students Bring Cheer to Senior Citizens
Formato de archivo: PDF/Adobe Acrobat - Versión en HTML
... Louros, as she presented a heartfelt farewell address before ... who is retiring from
the Board after 15 ... of Bellmore Schools Sheldon Dumain offers words of advice ...
www.bellmore.k12.ny.us/newsletters/july2002.pdf - Páginas similares
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+1
21 mins

delivered a stirring farewell speech

One more option...
Peer comment(s):

agree Jorge Rubino : I like it
12 hrs
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2 hrs

farewell words loaded with emotion/emotionally loaded words

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