Redacted

French translation: expurgés / caviardés

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English term or phrase:Redacted
French translation:expurgés / caviardés
Entered by: NikkoTh

01:03 Dec 28, 2020
English to French translations [PRO]
Law (general)
English term or phrase: Redacted
In this context

To collect a Payment Transaction from a Paying Agent, the Recipient must provide all details about the Payment Transaction required by us (“​​Collection Details​​”).
You remain ultimately responsible for the submission of the Collection Details to the Recipient.
YOU MUST NOT GIVE ANY OF THE COLLECTION DETAILS (REDACTED OR OTHERWISE) TO ANYONE OTHER THAN YOUR CHOSEN RECIPIENT.
NikkoTh
expurgés / caviardés
Explanation:
avec certaines parties couvertes d'encre, rendues illisibles

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Note added at 23 hrs (2020-12-29 00:03:59 GMT)
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je priviligiérais 'expurgés' (si accord avec nom masculin pluriel naturellement), pour une question de registre et de connotation.

Source (parmi bien d'autres): 'Dictionnaire juridique, politique, économique et financier' de Jean-Daniel Katz

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JH Trads
United States
Local time: 18:28
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Summary of answers provided
4 +1expurgés / caviardés
JH Trads
4masqués/cachés
Francois Boye


Discussion entries: 11





  

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redacted
masqués/cachés


Explanation:
https://www.bing.com/search?q=masquer des documents confiden...

Francois Boye
United States
Local time: 18:28
Native speaker of: Native in FrenchFrench
PRO pts in category: 199

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
neutral  Germaine: redact also means rédiger. Je ne vois pas l'utilité de transmettre des infos masquées au destinataire ou à quiconque. // Cf. discussion.
1 hr
  -> Redacted does not mean 'rédiger' in the US. Did you understand this: 'TO ANYONE OTHER THAN YOUR CHOSEN RECIPIENT'?
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2 hrs   confidence: Answerer confidence 4/5Answerer confidence 4/5 peer agreement (net): +1
redacted
expurgés / caviardés


Explanation:
avec certaines parties couvertes d'encre, rendues illisibles

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Note added at 23 hrs (2020-12-29 00:03:59 GMT)
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je priviligiérais 'expurgés' (si accord avec nom masculin pluriel naturellement), pour une question de registre et de connotation.

Source (parmi bien d'autres): 'Dictionnaire juridique, politique, économique et financier' de Jean-Daniel Katz



JH Trads
United States
Local time: 18:28
Specializes in field
Native speaker of: Native in SpanishSpanish, Native in FrenchFrench
PRO pts in category: 32

Peer comments on this answer (and responses from the answerer)
agree  Frederic Pisvin: "redacted" = "blackened"
7 hrs
  -> merci Frederic

neutral  Germaine: I don't understand how this can make sense. I read: communiquer... (par écrit ou autrement). // I know this meaning of redact. I finally can see how it may apply, but still have reservations - cf. discussion. À la rigueur, je retiendrais "caviardés".
14 hrs
  -> Hi Germaine, the intended meaning is pretty clear: to refrain from sending those details, complete or even redacted, to anyone other than chosen recipient. 'Redacted'/'expurgés' meaning some info of the collection details, not all info, is made illegible.
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